Here is the feedback we received from the teacher:
- Although Matt often didn't catch the chocolate box, teddy bear and flowers that Anna threw to him, it doesn't look as professional when she just gives the objects to him, so we will have to practice her throwing them and Matt catching them.
- The set hands need to perform, but some of the actions aren't incredibly visible in the shot, so we may have to give them more of a clear routine.
- We need to ensure that the two backing dancers come on at the same time/same angle and same speed, and they need to perform in the same way, rather than one performing more energetically than the other.
- Changing the people who sit behind the boat will mean that we can avoid one of the set hands holding up the boat until the backing dancer can get there (this will make the shot look a little cleaner)
- We still need to do something with the waves (perhaps stapling the netting to cardboard) because they take too long to setup and often move to far up or down the frame rather than staying in the correct position.
- Mila's performance is very professional but there are some gaps and we need to make sure her hair is away from her face
What went wrong...
- Grass slipped down
- Boyfriend missed chocolate box
- Dancers in background of set ups don't jiggle in time
- Serenaders stand awkwardly after giving food
- One set person jiggles while the other one does not
- Mila pushes hair out of face
- Chorus more of a MLS than a MS
- Boat comes on late
- Sam and Sharlene replace each other
- Boat not in middle
- Shark not in middle
- Skirt doesn't come off
- Uneven spread of dance vigourness
What went wrong...
- Balloon fell out of its hiding place
- Window starts off being held the wrong way round
- Serenaders stand awkwardly after giving food
- Ex-wife's bump looks strange
- Some of helpers sing echoes but others don't
- Tables off centre
- People holding Windows stand behind table instead of to the side which looks crowded
- Boyfriend didn't come on until half way through the third set up
- Waves too high up
- Nothing happens in the space between third set up and third chorus and Ava doesn't perform to camera as she is busy walking
- Dancers need to be crazier - their arms hang limp
- Right/wrong side could be moved slower
Take 3:
What went wrong...
- Boyfriend missed catching the chocolate box and flowers
Take 4:
What went wrong...
- Takes ages to get frame into position
- Some of the flowers on the grass are falling off
- One of the helpers holding the grass is in shot - you can see their hat
- One of the cloud holders in more in light than the other
- Its really hard for boyfriend to catch chocolate box
- Balloon stays on stage
- Backing dancers some on at different times
- Flowers not fully shoved into the camera
Take 5:What went wrong...
- Half of shot without tree in first set up is plain
- Some of the signs are obscured by Ava and boyfriend
- Balloon stays in shot
- Ava and dancers have to move forward during first chorus
- Anna stand to far in front to Sharlene which makes her look even shorter
- Serenaders miss their cue
- Ex wife's cushion/bump is exposed
- Grass isn't in right position
Take 6:
What went wrong...
- Boyfriend misses chocolate box
- Ava goes round to the wrong side of the bench
- Person holding tree looks very depressed - can see her face
- Balloon isn't kept behind tree person's back
- Grass slips down
- On of the grass holders faces is visible
Take 7:
What went wrong...
- Light too blue/dark
- Mila's socks
- When boyfriend stand up goes out of frame
Take 8:
What went wrong...
- Dancers bopping gets out of time with each other
- Serenaders awkward
- Windows at very different heights
- table at side
- Second Quick Change slow
- Boat too far back
- Frame to low
Take 9
What went wrong...
- A balloon randomly rolls across the stage
- Cushion/bump shows
- Serenaders awkward
- Second quick change almost goes wrong
- Boat to the side
- Shark only moves a little bit
- Waves go over boat sometimes
- Mila looks a bit confused in the final chorus
- Sharlene hangs around waiting to ballroom swing
- frame too low
- Boyfriend stands at side of frame instead of behind
- Boat doesn't need to be taken off after third set up - could it just be moved back
- Work out somewhere to put the oar?
Take 10: (Good take number 1)
What went wrong...
- Flowers are limp
- bopping goes out of time
- Anna overacts the giving of the presents
What went wrong...
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